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The History of StripGenerator 3

LegitSi    9 December, 2023
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The History of StripGenerator 3

Thus the great "History of StripGenerator" series once again reaches present day with the third installment of this riveting franchise. Also, yes, I was behind EmanateLantern (Alternate Name) and SoulContact (Lost Account). I have since lost the login details to both accounts. Also, the English here is based off of the original script for this comic, the one I used WordReference to translate word by word. Is this or the Spanish comic the original? Because the script was originally in English, but I made the comic with the Spanish translation.. Anyway, the relatively simple nature by which I translated the comic makes me think that we can translate SG/CC comics into other languages quite easily now, if you don't mind the fogginess. I liken the fogginess to VHS copying in a way, where imperfections exacerbate themselves. Now that you've seen the original English script, what do you think of my translation? What do you think of the visuals? I really do want to know. Anyway, that's it. cya


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09/12/2023 Edited   Naga sake Naga sake
Not sure what this has to do with SG. I've never been too good at this metaphor thing

09/12/2023 Edited   Pen_alias Pen_alias
Since I only know a few rudimentary words and phrases of Spanish I'm not really an adept judge of translation. The english all seems right and proper. The visuals seem very minimalistic which is fine if that's what you're going for. I'm no Norman Rockwell myself.

09/12/2023 Edited   El_Ceviche El_Ceviche
It's nice to see you making strips. And it's a lovely version of SG's apocalyptic end.

09/12/2023 Edited   LegitSi LegitSi
Exactly 1000 characters. I still do want criticisms of the translation and visuals, I went above and beyond for the visuals and well, I'm in Spanish class so I want comments on that too. This is my first comic since Summer 2023, so it's been months! See you all whenever inspiration strikes again.