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Balloon page 12

Naga sake    4 March, 2021
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Balloon page 12

More and more talking. I need to set stuff up for the story and all. Did adding the random items in the blank space of the text bot make it look weird or is it cool?


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04/03/2021 Edited   Naga sake Naga sake
Yes Neo. Mirror's edge. what are you gonna do about it?

04/03/2021 Edited   NeoChomik NeoChomik
Mirror's Edge

04/03/2021 Edited   MadameCercle MadameCercle
Ça a l'air intéressant ...

04/03/2021 Edited   Pen_alias Pen_alias
Something more intrinsic to the story would probably be more effective than random objects. Maybe the speakers faces with gradually changing expressions. Talking doesn't bother me, but I've developed this strange quirk over the years of actually liking to read.

04/03/2021 Edited   Mark Burkhart Mark Burkhart
I'm the lazy twin. Just saying...

04/03/2021 Edited   Mark Burkhart Mark Burkhart
writing is work.

04/03/2021 Edited   Mark Burkhart Mark Burkhart
I hate story lines unless they Hi-Jack me