Balloon page 10 top half

I hope that it doesn't seem like a battle ends out of nowhere, I hope that it all makes sense. I dont want fights to drag out forever like i feel like they used to. The female of the Pisces twins isn't dead yet, but after her brother being crushed to death, she's sure close. Thinking about it, I guess I didn't make it clear it was the guy that got crushed under there, and instead of it looking like the girl is reflecting his damage, it might seem like we're just seeing her being crushed. I'll make sure to have her thinking in the bottom half about how she's barely holding on to life after her brother's death. How she feels hollow, like she's missing a piece of herself.