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Issue 2 retcon crap

Naga sake    31 March, 2024
Issue 2 retcon crap

People have said before that alot of the pacing in my comic seems too fast and we dont have time to let characters sit, plus Halloway was meant to be more of a character than he was, when just *shows up* in issue 3 before pretty quickly crossing Julian, and you don't really feel that betrayal. People have suggested I add a scene like this with him into issue 2, so here ya go. I had a hard time figuring out WHERE I was gonna put it. This happens after the party at Naga's house, but before training with Naga, between two of the shots where he's hanging out with Jade actually. With as fast as the pacing in my comic is, the timeline is also extremely tight. Originally before I added the shots of Julian hanging out with jade (which sort of imply a passing of time) I counted and they had only known each other for like 3 days. My intention is that the comic so far has taken place over about a month or so. Also yes I worked two memes into one panel!


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01/04/2024 Edited   El_Ceviche El_Ceviche
I obviously don't know everything about this character though

01/04/2024 Edited   El_Ceviche El_Ceviche
I liked the character, so when she died, I resurrected her in a younger form in my strip.

01/04/2024 Edited   Naga sake Naga sake
Is it actually jade or does it just use that stock character? The stock characters can be whoever you want them to be they're generic designs

01/04/2024 Edited   El_Ceviche El_Ceviche
Love the strip btw.

01/04/2024 Edited   El_Ceviche El_Ceviche
Sorry have pneumonia and am reacting slowly. Julian just showed up in Zeek again where I have a younger, alternate reality version of Jade. Haven't decided how to handle that yet. I think she will be crushing on Rudevald at the time who is way too old for her and knows it.

31/03/2024 Edited   MadameCercle MadameCercle
Très belle planche.