my death bed

Elmer    1 February, 2021
my death bed

i have no idea what i made

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04/02/2021 Edited   Naga sake Naga sake
A suggestion from a long time comic artist, generally you want the speech bubbles you want read first on the left and higher, in this the bottom left one is meant to be read before the top one in the first panel, which gets confusing.

02/02/2021 Edited   MadameCercle MadameCercle
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01/02/2021 Edited   Mr. Burkhart Mr. Burkhart
Oh no! Too late!